The intro works great. And the story looks very promising.
Some mechanics are a little frustrating. Like it looks like I had to interact with the fast fans first to interact with the slow one. I ran to the slow one first given the visual clue of it being different than the other 2.
Also the unscrewing that required the right angle was a little odd. However if you keep using this mechanic of needing the right angle, it will be less odd the next time you encounter it.
I was exited, that the last scene hinted some game play like in 'FAR: lone sails'.
Not 100% sure you where going for this, but it would fit.
Thank you very much for your critique, and yes you are right, I was in a Far: Lone Sails mood ahaha, I'll try to fix it according to your suggestions on the next update I can manage!
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This is so cool and I really hope you keep working on it. I got to the part where you’re pumping fuel and couldn’t figure out how to progress
No progress past that point. Thank you for your comment tho :)
you’re welcome! It’s a really cool game. Has a lot of innovation going on and I am super intrigued by the story
Very awesome so far.
The intro works great. And the story looks very promising.
Some mechanics are a little frustrating. Like it looks like I had to interact with the fast fans first to interact with the slow one. I ran to the slow one first given the visual clue of it being different than the other 2.
Also the unscrewing that required the right angle was a little odd. However if you keep using this mechanic of needing the right angle, it will be less odd the next time you encounter it.
I was exited, that the last scene hinted some game play like in 'FAR: lone sails'.
Not 100% sure you where going for this, but it would fit.
Thank you very much for your critique, and yes you are right, I was in a Far: Lone Sails mood ahaha, I'll try to fix it according to your suggestions on the next update I can manage!
Ayyy great stuff!
2 minute story so far but glad to see it works!!